more and more wild animals are on the vergeof extinction and many areasons endan gouged . what are causes and solution of this statement
Animals are the beautiful creation of nature. Nowadays wildlife specit's life is on alarming rate and their life is not safe at all.Here, I would like accord with given statement.
There are manifold reason behind this phenomenon. First ans formost iso deforestation. human cut the tree to construct the building while ultimately cut tree adverse effect on animals life. moreover, pollution is the main factors for the restrictionsof animal . to emphesitate , industries and factories release their waste product to thendorse rivers and polluted it and uncomfortable for the marinemail species. furthermore, illigal foacing and human leads to thelp animals for their entertain and of their greedy nature . in aditon to this, sometimes natural disaster such as volcann earthquake beeps the wildlife in problem due to this, most of animal died.
there are also some preservation to solve their burning issue. Administration should build the wildlife sanctuaries whéreally animal be secure and no one here them . moreover, harshe punishment shouldbe applies on illegal flanking and hunting so that animal can live freely in forest. Furthermore, government shold telecast awareness programeso on televisionand on networkingsites. so that people become alert vand do some steps to consume wildlife.
To conclude, animal play an important role in our life and helps in managing the ecosystem. BOTH government and human together put some forward steps to preserve the fauna species.
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| 2018-05-31 | Parveenkamvoj | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58222222222 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98336060426 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9933113487 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092246855488 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292657002992 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278556745858 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502210777984 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239574924569 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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