In some countries, some people think that women should have equality with men, in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army. Others think women are not suitable for such jobs. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion.
Women are doing job to uplift the standard of their own notion. Presently, some people reckon that authorities sould organised job for women such as, police officer, army and so on. Thus, they can earn name and fame in country. Hence, other belive that such types of job is not necessary for women. Here, i will also discuss former views in this essay.
There are manifold views to endorse my point and view. First and foremost, in modern times majority of women have become well educated and active in every field. To demonstrate, joining in army and police officer is lucrative for women. To taking a real example from my country, sania mirza is a best player in tennis game. She has won massive match for own country. In addition to this, they can uplift the respect and dignity in life. To justify, if they will be join in such types of jobs then they can earn name and fame in life. Moreover, women can earn massive money with the help of job. On the contrary, opposite wind is also there.
Further emphasizing to my point of views, female donot strong in physical strength. Thus, they have to face many difficulty in life. As a result, they will be success full in life. Last but not least, joining in jobs can puts adverse impact on their children. To illustrate, female have to work around the clock in jobs. Owing to this, they cannot spend quality time on their juveniles. Thus, their offspring have to face physical and mental problem in their life.
From my notion, both sides have their own significance. Whereas, authorities should provides job facility for women. Thus, they can make bright future in life.
To recaptulate, undeniably, employment is quite essential part of life. Therefore, they should get chance in army and other fields as their capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77096774194 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35727006607 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3133611047 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.8846153846 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9230769231 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160024001948 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468164858051 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586399607686 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991350792933 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524162941464 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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