Day by day people are being so busy.Most of the people are independent to each other.Most of the people are busy to make their carrier.They can not manage the time for their family.People are spending their hole time on their works they do not have the time for their family, friend,wife and relatives.each and every persons want to be rich.They want their life luxurious; for this life people have to work very hard to be a achieve on their aim.
To be a successful life hard work is very important for us.In this case people forgot to give the time for their family.They are not able to give a happiness to their family.In some case husband and wife get divorce because they cannot make time for each other.We cannot get happiness only from money and a successful life the real happiness we can get from our family,friend.If those persons are not in our life our life cannot be joyful.Those money and success are nothing more than family.We cannot get satisfied with our life.
When people are busy and do not have time for their family members,friend slowly they are not in contract with them. they make a some distance and ignore that people who cannot gave them a time when they need.I have a example which is related with my neighbor.My neighbor are very busy on their life.both husband doing their job and they have one son also but they can not gave a quality time to their child.Their child is always alone at home their is no one to care him.Noe their son get addicted on smoking and alcohol.Because their is no one to give him time.if we cannot able to give them a time our child gone on a wrong path.
human beings are always live in a society.We cannot live alone.Some time we need a help from our society in different case.Life is very hard without society.WE Have to manage sometimes for society also.If we give a help in society then only we can also get a help from them.
So we should not only focused on our work we have to make some time for others also not only work is enough to live a life.work is only one small part of life.
- More working people are busy with work and have no enough time to spend with their family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family life and society? 56
- College days are the best days in person’s life: Agree or disagree 22
- The bar chart shows the average price of a house in the UK in different years. The pie chart shows the percentage between owners, people renting and those with second homes. 22
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 32
- Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while other strugle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 65
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...iness we can get from our family,friend.If those persons are not in our life our l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45358090186 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48616545147 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397877984085 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.065666396 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.833333333 106.682146367 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8333333333 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299685382205 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17844036044 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691622425591 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171907306807 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695320635898 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.01 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.42 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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