In this advance world people perform their entire work through the modern technology like, internet and stuffs. The above statement states that the thinking of human being is affected by the modern technology. i would like to support the statement with the following reasons.
First, the use of modern technology makes the people fully depend on the technology which results to the poor health condition. people used to visit the place to solve the problem but, nowadays people are fully depend on internet and all the works are done through the machine which affect the health of the general people. people used to walk to their work place but in this modern world they use different means of travel.
Secondly,thinking capacity of humans are gradually decreasing day by day due to the advance technology. Nowadays, people use internet instead of using their mind in simple tasks. All the research are done through the internet and all the data are presented on the internet which make work easy but decrease the thinking capacity. for example, if there is a research work people give first priority to the internet and nobody will visit the place of research and may leave the necessary data for the research.
thirdly, the modern technology reduce the human effort, it would imply that more work is done by machines. this equates to less work for the people. the human is becoming ever so obsolete by the day, as processes become automated and jobs are made redundant. it results to the decrease of the quality of the life of human beings because all the works are performs by the machine and no works are left for the general public.
In conclusion, i would like to conclude that there should be use of modern technology but the excessive use of technology will affect the life of the human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44091255687 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445161290323 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2295315311 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162712678676 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629272241738 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310397641281 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972599112138 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114360385129 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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