Most high-level positions in companies are filled by males even though the workforce in many developed countries is made up of more than 50 percent women. Companies should allocate a certain percentage of these positions to females.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To become a good leader, one must be a good follower. A greater number of institutions are led by men than women despite the fact that it is mostly run by female employees. It is certainly true that appointing high positions should be equally distributed to men and women to promote order and balance in a company.
To begin with, women should be given an opportunity to be assigned to high-rank positions as it prevents disparity, particularly in gender bias issues. The status between men and women are considered on the same wavelength. An example would be in Medical field wherein there is a proper designation of positions such as the head of Obstetrics Gynecology department should ideally be handled by female doctors rather than the opposite gender.
Moreover, It is also an opportunity for everybody in any aspect of the field to voice out their opinions or air their own suggestions. The companies can benefit from a different approach and techniques that can only be seen and provided by potentials women employees. Furthermore, considering different ideas and gaining knowledge from various viewpoints is one of the best ways that lead to a successful business.
However, it is believed almost by everyone that the head of the family is the father which pertains to all men should lead every operation and business in general. In China, the ultimate chosen firstborn son will heir the position and property of the king as an example. No baby girl is considered to be the next successor as their policy dictates.
In conclusion, it is optimal for any kind of business company to give way to women as part of the head administration to be given a chance to rule and show the positive aspects they could contribute for the success of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85909076456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8075586574 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142776052137 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498374442544 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447446610944 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080059331428 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365403344933 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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