In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Being employed is an ultimate goal for most of us who aspire to make an abundant living in life. In some parts of the world, industries accept applicants regardless of their age range and it is certainly true that this contributes to a successful development in a country.
To begin with, most of the business firm institutes the policy of hiring employees regarding screening of applicants which involves accepting different age range to a particular position as it gives a wider opportunity to the people. In addition, it promotes equality for all potential individuals especially between new graduates and senior professionals who are seeking for the same job. To cite an example, some of the Asian countries including Singapore and Hongkong, where old and young workers can be visibly observed in many parts of their country regardless of the work that suits them.
However, there are downside factors to be considered as the competition in the employment field is high. Fresh graduates competing for their way to acquire a high-rank position may not be that well equipped to handle the challenges compared to the senior staffs who are being more experienced in certain areas of expertise. Furthermore, it could also be argued that there is a possibility that older individuals may lose a considerable number of job placement if younger applicants are considered as they are more eager and active in venturing a new journey.
In conclusion, it is certainly a substantial progress for the economy of the society to implement balance and equality in choosing career oriented people regardless of the age status. Opening more opportunity to the public would mean bigger chances and selection to each individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17204301075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9822382436 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.923019943 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193522970506 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689321590593 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481293602417 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114467823864 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436989633407 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.