Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect Do you agree or disagree

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Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree.

Whether knowledge from internet is trustworthy has been a topic of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this statement is partly true as the amount of info released for the course of time is enormous, and measurability of it is a complicated issue.
On the one hand, with the invent of internet and other smart devices, the volumes of information to comprehend is massive. Thus, spam and false news increasingly stem from this phenomenon. The main culprits of this is either to steal personal information by hackers in cyber attacks or even to mislead the public which serves for political purposes. In any circumstances, this may feed internet users with inaccurate proclaims that would place ones at risk of bank account stolen or it may cloud their judgement which is the precursor of subsequent political biases.
On the other hand, even though there are certain pitfalls for internet surfers, merits of the platform are numerous including various sources of reliable knowledge and faithful info. One prime example is that ted.com a prevalent website which specializes in supplying unique perspectives and innovative ideas from experienced individuals regarding a wide range of subjects. In the light of these facts, it is apparent that the impacts of internet upon its users have both advantages and drawbacks. However, there are no instruments which are able to measure how much proportion of the information broadcast are trustful or not. This may rest on one’s educational background and ability to discriminate between sources which those facts originate from.
In sum, technological advancements have both motivated negative and positive trends in the deployment of internet. Therefore, it is uncertain to claim that the majority of information is fallacy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether knowledge from internet is trustworthy ...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...s been a topic of broad interest to the general public. In my opinion, this statement is partl...
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Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mplicated issue. On the one hand, with the invent of internet and other smart devices, th...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is either to steal personal information by hackers in cyber attacks or even to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30281690141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96016835788 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9306274076 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128760256273 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473942441511 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02693513414 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788348703432 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00949243347572 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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