Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agree that this is benefit.
To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, as the technology developing fast, internet, global trading and some other things bring more people in a globalised world. Happily, most people can accept this situation, but whether this situation good or not is still unknow. In addition, as I think, there are much more benefits on the development of globalisation.
As to the benefits, there are lots of things can be discussed. The one of the most important things in my opinion is that globalisation can be good for the cooperation and communication of differents countries. Because of globalisation, the global trading is more and more common in the world, and it is easy for us to buy different things from various countries in most supermarkets. And also, globalisation makes traveling to other countries convenient, so greater amount of people can travel to foreign areas. Secondly, I think a win-win condition can be brought by globalisation. As we all know, different countries have different superiorities, just like people, so globalisation can make countries strongpoints together and develop more quickly than working itself. Just as China, we can clearly see that benefit. Before Chinese economic reform, we did not want to consociate with the world, so we developed slowly and were occupied by other countries. But now, in the background of globalisation, we earn an excellent evolution. I the these are all the benefits which globalisation can take to us.
Though there are many benefits, it still has some negetive developments. Because of the globalisation, the relationship between different countries is extremely close. If one country suffers a severe risk, others might also be influenced. But this is the thing we must face because of globalisation, and we can not ignore the good things that globalisation brings to us.
All in all, globalisation is the main direction of the world development, and I think it can bring more and more benefits to people in the globalised world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20440251572 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20679637285 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7205547635 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254690650406 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860264061154 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655783580023 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188822607875 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647703626533 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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