Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this modern society, people tend to be more open-minded about their life-styles, leading to lack of knowlege in traditional culture such as the deep meaning of national festivals. Instead of enjoy those holidays in a traditional ways, they simply want to come in for their own ways. this has created a aging arguement about whether to keep the tradition in holidays or adapt the new modern culture. From where I stand, traditional and religious festivals are crucial and important to each country.
There are numerous reasons for why these need to be obsoleted. Some of the traditional and religious festivals related to convetional and complex activities; furthermore, in some case, especially in Asian countries, some prejudices and discriminations still occur in their national celebrations. this means that those traditional conventions might be out-dated and unsuitable for the young generation.
On the other hand, these festivals include national beauty and deep meanings. Owing to these beauty marks specializing the nation, the residents are able promote the country and its reputation to the whole world. Moreover, it is a must to preserve the tradition and religion in oder to not just educate next generations but also to express respect to the roots. In the history, former people had to suffer alot to build and form the nation, such as facing wars, diseases and financial problem; for that reason, these traditonal holidays were created to remember the out-standing history.
All in all, the tradition meanings is outweight the modern cultures; as a result, being a resident of a country, maintaining the regional beauty in national festival is a priority
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30337078652 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94466351532 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3449857062 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16889894535 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613418977045 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387389671409 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103426389369 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420449876462 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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