Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
The importance of physical educational programs which has depatable.Nowadays, it's become many schools sclaming that is beneficial .This trend has sparked the potential impact in recent years.Should schools let this customarity for free or to encourage students only.This essay will elaborate the statement, with a logical conclusion.
Analyzing this statement,There are a several reasons Why, should schools let students or teenagers to practice stamina.However, It's a type of educational programs to encouraged students to study hard and to believe in Their skills.When they make endeavor that will open up their positive energy.They will focus on Their studies on the other hand, they will focus on their own health.For instance, physical educational programs will let them to control their time
management and interacting together.Further more, it has been to have a good class in yoga and fitness.
Probing a head , one of the main reasons,In fact this idea will prompt students to have a leader in each group.For example, Each coach will responsible for fitness class or yoga class which they can hear a different suggestions.Alhougt, parents are have a great role when they saw their teenagers avoid obesity . Leaders can be good leasiner to share ideas for the schools and how to give a presentation about caring for our Bodies.How ever, practicing yoga will let them away from the exams and makes them relax and calm .they will not get angry because teenagers or students are often stressed.
To sum up, Infrequent exercise can let people break boring moment.I believe that we must care about our bodies.Eating vitamins is also essential to our lives .How ever that will makes us can work and think or even to study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as for, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28057553957 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10512249586 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.053208343 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.6 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.6 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208077297689 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110971819498 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950111326055 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109024609918 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954048739841 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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