Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Corporates creation in provincial areas is better than creating them in urban zones. The disadvantages may be harmful to the climate, but the advantages exceed the disadvantages. They are two way of thinking in this project. On this issue, it has few flaws, and lots of advantages, and this what the essay will be about.
Studies have confirmed that there are a little number of defects in establishing companies and industry in regional areas. It will harm the environment also it will increase global warming. When you build companies in rural places, the agricultural land will be bulldozed in order to build them. In Berlin, Germany, in 1997, some economists decided to set up a little of companies in Cochem city which is a rural town, but they found there are com disadvantages of this action.
On the other hand, the advantages are magnificent to construct the companies in the rustic places. These places are centers of raw materials, and it easy for the founders to produce their goods. Administrators will be able to hire a lot of people, so there will be no unemployment there. For workers, it is easy to market the products. There are companies specializing in production of agricultural fertilizers, so they are useful for farmers.
In the end, everything has drawbacks and benefits. Notwithstanding, everyone does what it is profitable for himself. In this matter, we have to be keen of our environment, and our industry for a purpose of uplifting the country. Also we should encourage the youth founders to establish their own project in urban parts with a view to advance the industry and small businesses.
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...izers, so they are useful for farmers. In the end, everything has drawbacks and...
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...for a purpose of uplifting the country. Also we should encourage the youth founders ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02197802198 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00720330982 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3284562218 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223714247464 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614489736481 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320551981009 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12178194488 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234550210398 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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