Most young people leave school with a negative attitude toward learning. Why do you think this is happening?
What can be done to encourage them to have a positive Attitude?
Nowadays, it is true that people that already graduated from the school always do not want to study anymore. There are many reasons causing this problem and also several ways to tackle it.
There are several reasons leading to the problem. First of all, after graduating, people have to spend most of their time on making a living. As a result, they do not have enough time to study anymore, which makes they would not have a positive attitude to study. Besides, people who have already graduated from school do not have examination stress anymore. However，the motivation is always coming from stress. People who do not have this stress are not movtivated to study hard. Thirdly, when people do not study for a long time, their learning skill becomes not as good as before, which may lead to the result that they don''t want to study.
In fact, many ways could be used to solve this problem .First, company should offer their employees study time and chances. Also, government have the responsibility to encourage people to learn and develop more knowledge. While people are encouraging by the government and their companies, they also should urge themselves to regard learning as an important thing and ask themselves to continue learning. For example, people could go to the library on weekends with their family or friends. It is an interesting activity that can both share spare time with others and make learning less boring.
Although people have many reasons about being negative to learning, we can take many measures to change it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, may, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in fact, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80384615385 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31923714759 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503846153846 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 260.0 20.2975951904 1281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1249.0 106.682146367 1171% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 260.0 20.7667163134 1252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 7.06120827912 1728% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253097256545 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253097256545 0.084324248473 300% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150768236807 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348773587529 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.2 13.0946893788 1002% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -183.96 50.2224549098 -366% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.5 11.3001002004 916% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.14 8.58950901804 223% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 106.0 10.1190380762 1048% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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