It is a good idea for people to continue working in an old age, if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people believe that giving the elder chances to work when it is possible is a good idea. I do agree this opinion while there are many people who do not agree.
People whodo not agree with this idea because of several reasons. First of all, comparing with young employees, elder employees do not healthy enough. As a result, when they are doing work, their reaction would be slower than the young employees. In addition, if their jobs need them to hang on or take some heavy things, they may not afford it. Secondly, companies would prefer to choose young people instead of the elder because young employees have the higher possibility to stay in the companies steadily. At the same time, elder employees may quit their jobs soon because the work stress for them is heavier.
In my opinion, I argue that let people in an old age continue working is a good ideas. Here are my reasons. Firstly, encouraging more people to work is good for the economic development. Furthermore, continuing working is a good way for the elder to spend their spare time. If they did not have jobs,maybe they would stay at home everyday. This kind of life is very boring. Thirdly, some elder people may not have enough incomes. They need jobs to eam money and make a living. And the government have the responsibility to offer this chances for them.
In conclusion, I do believe that we should encourage the older to have jobs. And I believe they would be responsible for their work too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... have jobsmaybe they would stay at home everyday This kind of life is very boring Thirdl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53053435115 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29958902138 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 262.0 20.2975951904 1291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1187.0 106.682146367 1113% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 262.0 20.7667163134 1262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 160.0 7.06120827912 2266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353005286239 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.353005286239 0.084324248473 419% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2308468292 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797230935321 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 130.9 13.0946893788 1000% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -177.53 50.2224549098 -353% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.1 11.3001002004 912% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.92 8.58950901804 220% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 9.78957915832 521% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 106.8 10.1190380762 1055% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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