Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles.
Over the past few years it has been observed that motorcycle fatalities have risen steeply among teenagers. There are many people who believe that the government must completely restrict those below 24 years of age from riding two wheeler motor vehicles. I completely agree with this statement. In this essay I will bolster my opinion with examples.
The current trend rampant among teenagers is the need for speed over safety. Teenagers have the desire for a new thrilling experience at every moment of their life which causes them to use the accelerator like toy, while paying no heed to the brakes. A study conducted by MIT shows that people in the age of 14 to 22 use the brakes 10 times less often in comparison to adults in high speed scenarios. The social pressure on youngsters to be cool also drives them to picking speed over protection. A study conducted by the Boston emergency ward found out that the number of fatal injuries among youngsters were mainly due to high speeds and the lack of any protective gear.
In addition, the psychological and hormonal factors also contribute a great deal towards bike related fatalities. The mental situation of teenagers are formed is a manner that encourages them to disregard safe driving. For instance the psychology department at UCLA conducted a psychological test that found out that their teenager students in their campus had a subconscious mental inclination for driving recklessly. Similarly hormones play a role for deaths among teenagers riding bikes. The need for an adrenaline rush is very common among young adults. A test conducted by the CVS pharmacy showed youngsters being highly addicted to the rush of adrenaline.
To summarize, the government should ban those under 24 years form riding a motorcycle. I completely agree with this statement since their judgement is adversely affected due to psychological and hormonal factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12179487179 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7860879966 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9544432292 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941370105179 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292768064656 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525435364671 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667352592779 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423810399715 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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