The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
It is the case that many people move out of the rural areas to urban areas to work, this leads to several severe problems in both places. However, I believe there must have some solutions to handle them.
It is undeniable that there are a number of issues concerning housing shortage in cities and the underdevelopment in agricultural areas. With regard to the former, rural depopulation exacerbates the unfettered growth of population in cities while the area square is limited, which results in the lack of houses and over-priced accommodation, so the poor find it difficult to own a house. As far as I am concerned is the fact that the movement of country dwellers afflicts the development of suburbs as the talent people leave out their native places to seek other opportunities in the flourishing cities, which increases the unequal economic growth between two.
Despite the aforementioned hardships, I am of the opinion that these problems can be tackled to some extents. One way forward is allocating budget in suburban areas so as to foster the infrastructures and promote the businesses and industries in there, as a result, the growth of the economy can go up and constitute the equal distribution between two areas. This appeals automatically more skillful employees to work and the local workers can take the consideration to move out of their hometown anymore. This helps to decrease not only the flux of immigrants to cities but also urban overpopulation, lessening the house issues in the cities.
In conclusion, the people moving to cities poses a lot of downsides, but the authorities should carry out new ventures to solve the problematic issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... is allocating budget in suburban areas so as to foster the infrastructures and promote ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05072463768 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05022544024 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7144497002 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223333036752 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789897507347 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682505193185 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124836016965 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603307041978 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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