Movies and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be censored. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, movies and computers game involving violent element are ubiquitous, which according to a number of people, has adverse influence on young generation and should be censored, Whereas, others believe that they are innocuous recreational activities. From my own perspectives, barely does playing aggressively games negatively affect one’s demeanor.
On the one hand, there is a universal acceptance that gratuitous violence should be restricted. It is a commonsensical notion that adolescents are intrigued by strange things and don’t reach maturity to a degree that they can assess what is beneficial or detrimental. If they are frequently exposed to violence at too early ages, they stand a high chance of desensitizing to those hazardous and morally unacceptable actions and therefore establish belligerent pattern of behavior. This is the case of cinema industry in which movies are categorized into various subgroups appropriate for each particular age brackets.
On the other hand, the majority of populations have no difficulties in distinguishing between real life and virtual counterparts. Consumers of violent recreation are merely passing time or experiencing vicarious thrill. Other portions are recorded to derive delectation and alleviate stress just by watching horror movies. There is even the slight chance that by watching violent entertainment, audiences will be dissuaded from such behavior or feel their need for violence has been sufficiently expressed. For instance, an individual who plays violent computer games or is obsessed with horror films, according to research, is no more likely to commit a violent crime or display abnormal behavior.
In conclusion, though there are certain levels of aggression in actions that should be curtailed, misunderstanding heavily-censor can lead to diminishing in experience, artistic and message emanate from the films or games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77659574468 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24039945413 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663120567376 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9353393735 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192124763088 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604199748211 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390806132885 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107576440944 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458501136187 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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