Music is played in every society and culture in the world today.
Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that music only positively affects individuals and societies. In contrast, others admit that music can also have disadvantages on both. In my view, I concur that although music has some minor disadvantages on societies and individuals, its benefits can not be denied as the music plays a crucial role in everyone's life.
On the one hand, music is an indispensable part of life. First, when the composers create a symphony, they aim to satisfy the audiences and bring them a source of joy. Therefore, they bring their hearts into the song and make them have a signification. For many people, they consider the music as their buddies - who can feel sympathize with them when they feel depressed or share with them when they have fun. The best illustration of this advantage is when a family has a wedding party or an anniversary, they always turn on the music so that the attendance is inspired. Moreover, melodies also have another purpose, for instance, listening to baroque or classical music can help students highly concentrate on study. Secondly, music is also a way for people to earn money. It is a fact that the singer is one of the most well-earing money in the world. They have become famous and loved all around the world since they created a hit. Consequently, they collect money from advertisements and salaries. Many K-pop idols live a luxurious life and become the central point of the newspaper.
On the other hand, the music field also witnesses some drawbacks. Listening to loud music for a long time can cause hearing problems, and also music causes noise pollution, which is a big concern of the governments in big cities. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to songs and waste their study time listening to them all day. Therefore they should control their time and reasonably spend time listening to music.
To reiterate, I believe that music is essential for all people despite some of its negative influences. And that is one of the biggest differences between people and animals - the emotional interest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92219020173 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74811840069 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538904899135 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0716101577 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289566733821 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921485580023 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770128049495 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200053696266 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11081317358 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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