Most of the nations such as the USA, Canada and Australia encouraged secondary school students to do Part-time jobs. As I am from India and in my country majority of the students depend upon their parents and do not like to do any work during school ages. So, there are various pros and cons of this practice if adolescents started to do any work.
There are various reasons why people think inspiring teens is beneficial in many ways. The first and foremost reason is that youth will become independent and they will be able to take their own responsibility and manage their own work properly. it will not aids to enhance their confidence level and make them more sincere towards work. Moreover, teens can get various opportunities to learn new skills such as improving communication and team work etc at workplace which help them to make proficient in particular field. Consequently, children can set these skills on the path of the lifetime carrier.
Furthermore, some surveys find that those student who work hard and earned a moderate amount in the school years, are able to achieve good grades than those who do not work at all. in addition, some parents are not able to provide higher education owing to the fact that higher expenses of schools. if teenagers do part-time jobs then they can lessen burden from their parents and fulfill their dreams to get higher education in best schools. Finally, by doing jobs, teens will utilize their time in a fruitful way and instead of wasting it on social media and playing with friends.
There are some drawbacks of doing part-time jobs by teenagers which can not be ignored. Firstly, students find more difficulty to do extracurricular activities when they do work continuously. Students try to earn enough money by doing work day and night which not only effects their health but also getting lower grades in class too. Secondly, some studies found that those teens who work long hours are more likely to engage in illegal activities such as drugs or alcohol because they are exposed to older co-workers who may lead them astray.
To sum up, part-time jobs are highly beneficial for teenagers to learn something new. However, the type of work should be decided wisely and not allowed to work more than 12 -15 hours a week.
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- In my countries teenagers are encouraged to do part time jobs What s the situation like in out country What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part time job 73
- In many professional sports there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions 73
- In this past people used their free time in better ways as today To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- You recently met a manager of a new company started in your city After the meeting the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company However you cannot accept the job offer Write him back and say How you feel about the job Why can t 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in particular, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82864450128 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51268587547 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7823526642 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251300398722 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911953580228 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991831819941 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154859019046 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090077180507 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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