The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problem does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
In this contemporary world, the overuse of natural resources has become a concerning issue. These resources are being used for many human purposes. This essay will introduce the reasons for abusing the natural resources and some of the solutions.
Firstly, one of the main problems of over-exploiting oil is catastrophic disasters. Extracting oil is an act of hollowing a part of the soil layers. This will cause soil erosion, unstable earth, earthquakes and so on. To tackle this problem, people should reduce the rate of consuming oil by levying taxes on it ,and replace oil with renewable, environment-friendly resources of energy.
Exploiting forests, one of other main natural resources, also gave rise to many issues. Due to the booming population, natural resources are even more and more vital. Trees are cut down to urbanize, expand the living space for people, being materials for the use of building or heating. Not only does it damage the lungs of the Earth, logging also does harm to the natural habitat of wildlifes. A solution to this problem is the government needs to form national parks, wildlife conservation parks and more. This solution not only protects the greens but also the wild animals.
Another issue is the overuse of freshwater. Overuse of freshwater for a long period of time will cause water shortages. As a result, the cost for water will rocket and bring along with the burden for the underprivileged. The way to address this problem is raising the concern of humans about wasting freshwater. In this way, water sources will be affordable for everyone.
For the all aforementioned problems, the solution is educating people about conservation, prohibiting the exploitation of natural resources, replacing fossil fuels by using renewable energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21254355401 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98848693468 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6700018289 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7368421053 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209983689028 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633115707909 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432785254981 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110394619835 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578925344861 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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