The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. What is your opinion? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages.
It is common knowledge that every nation on the planet has its own regime. However, there is a suggestion that instead of having several regional authorities, the entire globe should be managed by just one. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and try to draw some conclusions.
Let's start with the benefits of unified management throughout the world. One of the main advantages is avoiding conflict between countries. If the whole world were a state, there would be no territorial disputes. For the first time, on a global basis, the war might disappear. This also means that large armies and weaponry are no longer in need. Hence, spending on the military may be directed toward other fields such as education and health.
From the opposite viewpoint, combining hundreds of nations is not a good idea. The globe is home to a varied range of ecosystems, as well as a diverse range of ethnicities, languages, and ways of living among its billions of residents. Corruption, religious disputes, and human rights often contribute to the country's instability and disintegration.
In addition, economic growth will be delayed. Political rivalry has been seen as a motivator for innovation among the most developed countries in the world. Countries that were technologically and economically behind their rivals were more vulnerable to exploitation. The existence of competitor nations gave an additional incentive to develop in this way. However, when the world unites, economic competition would be abolished.
All things considered, in comparison to our current political system, a one-world government would have the same problems, only a thousand times more complicated. I personally believe that the disadvantages outweigh any advantages.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36727272727 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04881280241 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1876635885 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6842105263 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199993617688 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470284244471 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442839787219 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981259130407 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057048608825 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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