In today's industrialized society, more and more of resources like oil, forests and water are being consumed rapidly, we impose an unbearable burden on the environment, by consuming a remarkable amount of natural resources. This phenomenon can cause consequences which are not negotiable and viable measures should be taken inorder to sustain them.
Firstly, consumption of petroleum, woodland and drinkable water are very essential needs today. As they are not limitless, overconsumption of oils can lead to the conflicts between the nations. While, cars, machines and industries which use these petroleum products as the primary source of working, they will be doomed. Furthermore, unnecessary deforestation, can take us to a critical stage of ecosystem by causing the extinction of species and being responsible for green house gas emissions. Lastly, fresh water which is responsible and primary source of humans, is another big concern since it only occupies a negligible percentage at 3% in water reservation. The deterioration of these resources can make living on earth impossible.
Secondly, due to the unfortunate depletion of these resources, major steps have to be taken in order to avoid such a bleak future. Strict rules should be imposed by government to control this behaviour. By incrementing the prices and publishing strict laws for oil. Moreover, government can take control of it. Strict warnings to be given to the industries which contaminate the water for residents, and also encouraging them to use limited water per day. Finally, locals should consider the idea of gardening and plantation.
To conclude, numerous consequences can occur in the future, due to the shortage of these valuable resources, and can affect the humankind and other species, so necessary steps to be taken to avoid this scenario and thereby, enhancing the environmental condition.
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- Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility libraries are not necessary any more Do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46575342466 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10067517269 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.873718961 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260910969606 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755570129234 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523444107921 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152528983372 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634184698643 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.