Nowadays, people are more concerned about the place that, best fits for their lifestyle. The world has seen a huge migration of people from rural to city side. Certain individuals believe that the countryside is the best option to live and others, prefer to live in city areas. In my opinion, settling in rural and in urban areas have their both merits and demerits respectively.
To begin with, the population in most of the countries are willing to migrate to urban areas due to multiple reasons. Firstly, the city side provides an ease of transportation for the people, allowing them to travel several areas in period of time and also various amenities that are not commonly found in the villages such as shopping malls, theatres, restaurants and more. Secondly, the urban areas provide multitude of job opportunities, as most of the companies are located here. Moreover, the earnings of people working in city areas is quite high comparing with rural areas. For instance, better medical facilities are present in metropolitan areas.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that, urban areas provide a luxurious life. However, many people believe that, rural lifestyle makes an individual closer to the environment and avoiding hazards of urbanization. It is believed that, people living in rural areas have a healthier life, breathes fresh air and eat hygienic foods and live in a relaxed and quite environment which is impossible in metropolitan areas. Moreover, city residents inevitably face several consequences due to pollution and stress. To illustrate, the people in countryside obviously have high life expectancy rate.
In conclusion, although, there are different opinions, living in countryside and urban areas have their positive and negative sides, it mainly depends on the requirements and preferences of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...llowing them to travel several areas in period of time and also various amenities that are not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31615120275 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86824471441 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8248258135 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314740649446 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101705158972 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907093103353 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199827809513 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085761848596 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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