Nowadays, more and more people are getting interested in exploring off the beaten track. So some entrepreneurs believe that if they invest in space tourism, they can attract many people and this business will bring them great success. In my opinion, this vision is feasible and loads of significant changes will take place in the present space explorations accordingly.
On the one hand, I believe that scientific developments and inventions will make space tourism possible for everyone. I can say that, since humankind has become very skilled at harnessing technology in all sorts of creative ways, and technologists are pushing back the frontiers of knowledge everyday, there will be no limitation for people to travel to space in future. In fact, there have been thousands of astronomers working and doing research on other planets who had done their missions and returned back to the earth safely. Therefore, there are no reasons why space tourism cannot come into reality only if the price of such travels gets reasonable.
On the other hand, space tourism can draw the attention to space explorations and help governments to receive financial support from the private sector in this regard. In the other words, by expanding the space travel industry, the importance of knowledge about space will be clear to everybody as this knowledge will guarantee the safety of potential travellers. Moreover, development of some specific machines and infrastructures needed for such travels, will provide aerospace science necessary tools to make progress as well. For instance, individuals who are going to fly to the other planets will need accomodation to stay there for a while which can be used by explorers as well.
To conclude, considering the fast speed of technological developments in recent decades, it totally stands to reason that taking a trip to newly discovered areas in space will become true in the near future and the space discovery will also earn a lot of advantages through space tourism.
- Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment 56
- It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship Others say that this is the parents responsibility to control what their children do and watch To what extent do you think that thi 89
- People visiting other countries should adapt to the customs and behaviors expected there They should not expect the host country to welcome different customs and behaviors To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- More and more couples are deciding to be child free to have no children in other words Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives suc 89
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pushing back the frontiers of knowledge everyday, there will be no limitation for people...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...imitation for people to travel to space in future. In fact, there have been thousands of ...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...planets who had done their missions and returned back to the earth safely. Therefore, there a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20923076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8300734931 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9212388582 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.083333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384531733285 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144152397367 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895125627881 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242682501452 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270115656303 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.