New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In current civilization, modern technologies are absoulutely important which are delevoped incredibly by scientists. Advanced technology has altered the way offspring spend their leisure time. Depiste some obvious drawbacks of this trend, I believe that there are outweighed by the benefits.
On the one hand, there are several negative effects on how children spend their time with technology gadgets. Firstly, there is an adverse impact on their health. Nowadays, children regularly play video games barely a day. This is more likely to suffer from health problems such as eye strain, obesity…
More than that they rarely spend time for social activities. This is prone to social isolation. In the future, that may be the main reason will affect their later lives. Eventually, technology can make their brain more lazy because of many anwers for their homework on the internet. They just need to search for the answer afterwards write on their notebooks and they often do not care about explanation.
On the orther hand, I believe that the positives are more significant than the negatives. At first, modern technology gives offspring more options to the range of amusement sources. They can use technology divices for relieving stress after a hard study day. There are many entertainemnt activities on the internet such as listening to music or playing video game… Furthermore children can establish and maintain a relationship easily because of the advert of social networking. For example, facebook is one of the biggest social networks that connect people all around the world and help people keep in touch with each other. Finally, there are countless documentary resources on the internet. It is really easy for children to broaden new knowledge.
In conclusion, I would argue that new technology brings more benefits than drawbacks.
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34129692833 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74011913292 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7630832752 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3684210526 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4210526316 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259289429017 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753260073313 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691234788474 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148376425439 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622957427095 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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