In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, either after completing their college or getting a job, the majority of matured individuals are settling in their parent’s house. Personally, I opine has several disadvantages of this phenomenon which I elaborate more below.
On the one side, we must realize the major drawbacks of adults living with their family after achieving degree certificate or finding a job is uncontrollably/poor financial management. Ones are provided with all of basic needs ranging from ordinary to luxury items, arousing complete dependency without self-reliance. Consequently, this leads them to commit illicit activities when their parents no longer pay their bills. Furthermore, this way of living can create feeling of insecurity in social environment when facing adult life. They feel immature to nurture an emotional balance and psychological burden to express their thought and creativity due to parent’s limitation, and thus weathering the parental pressure.
On the flip side, this view has been obvious me giving several benefits that is decreasing the great amount of unemployment. Accommodated by parents could lessen adult’s expense and seize greater career prospects amid today’s challenge of job competition. In the future, individuals may develop a stable income to achieve welfare and prosperity. In addition, there will be strong-bond family embracing more affection and attention from parents wholeheartedly. Later in marriage life, this could hinder family conflicts occurring these days, child abuse, domestic violence, even acrimonious divorce.
In conclusion, while this issue seems to bring several advantages for plausible reasons, I would argue that the drawbacks of living with family during early adulthood shows more adverse effects. Those include the incapability of accomplishing financial success as well as individual’s social insecurity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89010989011 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13758876035 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0275858726 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333511117894 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906933973749 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629608163873 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183547471279 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650146224462 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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