The noise level around us is constantly increasing and affecting the quality of our lives. What causes the everyday noise that many people face? What can be done about it?
It is undoubtedly that the more level of noise increase in our surroundings, the more quality life of all creatures will be influenced. There are several causes and considerable solutions that I elaborate in my essay.
Regarding the causes, the high-intense sound is due to the use of machinery household appliances. Many, particularly women, handle the mundane household tasks with such tools (washing machine and vacuum cleaner). Consequently, all ages unconsciously sicken from Noise Induced Hearing Loss (NIHL). Furthermore, the growing number of vehicles use becomes another overriding factor. Both human and life cycle animals have been disrupted, eventually, ending up the species extinction. Insects, tree crickets and bees, are sensitive to the sounds of traffic distorting their mating behaviour, cited by WWF that their vital role is to maintain pollination and healthy soil.
Turning to solutions, to reduce loud noise in daily basis, the factories are supposed to develop their machinery products to be more advanced, in order that such a additional silencer can cover unpleasant sound well. To illustrate, completed with electrical suppresser for household tools helps to reduce the intensive sound, and thus away from disturbing voice surroundings. In addition, enacting heavier taxes to car ownership could reduce road noise along with precluding thinner ozone layer occurred by a heat issue from vehicle fumes. To respond such issue, the Danish government following the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) sets a target to reduce its emission by 70% in 2030.
In conclusion, the causes of the increase of loud noise amongst all creatures include the cutting-edge technological household use and an excessive number of private vehicles. Meanwhile, the considerable solutions are considered; innovating special suppression system and strictly controlling automobile use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70212765957 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01375049025 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663120567376 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4002366157 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123313686751 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038505684669 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573592310427 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886646233657 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642255344513 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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