Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, while some people believe that intelligence can be earned through comprehension and learning experience, others feel that such quotient is inherited by their parents. There are arguments on both sides which we will discuss here.
On the one side, objectors of genetic bases of intelligence argue that to stimulate growth and development of children's intelligence potential, expected educators and parents could create brain-boosting with applying games. During early childhood, chess and cryptograms play a vital role to constructively strengthen the excellent brain’s ability to focus on. Furthermore, enhancing one’s prodigious quality may not only manifest their crystallised intelligence in knowledge and skill but also embark fluid intelligence on critical thinking. One of the most effective ways to involve hippocampus in memory is to exercise regularly.
On the flip side, exponents of this view claim that there are maternal nutritional factors for fetal brain development. The epigenetic remodelling of fetal genes would be shaped during second trimester of pregnancy. When a mother enhances nutrient-rich foods deriving from seafood (Salmon and Tuna) and vegetables (Spinach and Broccoli), this results in fascinating development of baby’s brain. In addition, the prodigies are inherited by in-genuine family descendants, especially mother’s genes. Estimated by University of Queensland, 20 from 40% fetal DNA research stems from their mother in maternity phase, and thus, effortlessly, ones would have been the high intellect.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, compared to long-term commitment and effort, individuals can exceptionally be a brilliant one from genetic factors. Those include maternal nutrient intake as well as dominant inheritance. This is as long as the closest people do build environmental influence on children’s creativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prodigious quality may not only manifest their crystallised intelligence in knowl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94833948339 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24947088231 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70110701107 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3534258399 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171286192648 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518118917038 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768220874393 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121871235913 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127739617146 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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