More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems cause this issue? What do you think are the possible solutions?
Nowadays, buying cars are becoming popular trend for people who reside in developing countries. There are several causes and solutions from this tropical issue which I will elucidate more below.
Regarding the causes, public recognition is one of the contributing factors which inflicts more developing societies to firstly purchase tertiary items aimed to flaunt their wealth. In connection with showing off welfare and prosperity; and financial success, people which drive luxury car brands (Ferrari and Roller Royce) would derive the sense of social respect towards what ones possess. Furthermore, inequity of public transportation and timetables prioritize societies to expend amount of dollars. To illustrate, Indian who live in urban areas or farming land decide to retain car ownership due to unavailable access of mass transit. Thereby, if citizen were to travel to their daily destination, they would foresee an increasing productivity.
Turning to an array of solutions, cultivating financial behaviour will change societies’ general perception of prestigous items. Seemingly, those who stick this tenet could control their budget and prevent economic conflict which will threat their psychology, consequently, ones probably sicken for obsessive compulsive disorder. In addition, the government should impose stricter regulation related to taxes and services in order to shift those behaviors. Following with high-levy and complicated procedures, this might reinforce four-wheeled vehicle owners to drive public modes of transport as their main travelling choice.
In conclusion, the causes of car buying trends among developing societies seem to be public spotlight and unreachable mass transit in countryside. Meanwhile, the solutions of this are to understand car buying decision and enact its purchasing limit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92075471698 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92477418321 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68679245283 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.203900031 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209880588594 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671893745043 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670035314054 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140740269124 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815292847732 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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