Due to advancement of technology , today's the majority of individuals prefer to socialize online except the face to face . I this essay , I shall probe the causes of this phenomenon and also discuss whether this trend is good or bad.
People mostly select socialize online for all purposes like business as well as personal as it provides many facilities such as time saving. Socialize applications are also best for become famous because these days many sites are available for this issue. Social media make good source of spend leisure time. These are main reason for first preference to this system.
The option to choose social media is good because it is help to do job with other country. To quote, if any person do work in England but he/she lives in India, in this case, that media helps to his/her owing to many sites are created for complete this work. It helps to save time and spent more time with their family. In the end, socialise online also assist of all learners for education as an internet many applications are available which is related with enlighten. As a result, this phenomenon is best for all masses.
Of course, the drawbacks of this issue is lack of communication's manners. If any person use online site a lot of time then he/she not able to get social manners. To site an example, children who use socialize online they spend all time with electronic gadgets the same time they donot learn a skill of communicate with elders or other people. Consequently, in this case, it is bad development of all nations.
To summarize, it can be said that we cannot say that socialize online is become positive or negative development . It always depend of individuals mind that they how much time consume with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, well, of course, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78737541528 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53449197209 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.549714674 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7647058824 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173641128695 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583822557918 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709902343364 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105124500461 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389229970036 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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