Nowadays, crime makes a hot potato because it increases at alarming rate. Ergo, in many nations, people believe a prison word is represented as the best way to reduce it. But, edification is argued as a more effective step. In this essay, I shall discuss both view points before reached the valid reason.
Prison sentence plays a good role to decrease violence. Everyone feared about going to that place where government allow to keep all criminals at one place because when any person who do a crime then policemen caught and lock in the prison. They donot allow to meet with the any family members. In this case, no one person like to think about prison. To add it, if any person go at that place as he/she think their reputation is down in the society or in relationship. Hence, in this way, prison is helpful to decrease crime in many countries.
The option of education is proves good for decrease of crime owing to by studying all youngster able to know about all punishments which bear by criminals and given by official authorities. To quote, many books are manufactured to awareness of people about crimes or their punishments which proves very beneficial to decline crime. To add it, crime is do by masses when they have not job. In this case, they have not any source for earn finance but if all youngster do study well. Hence, they easily got job, no one individual live without work. As a result, they donot think about do crime and participate in reduce crime race.
To summarize, according to me, literacy is best way to reduce violence rather than prison because any person do crime on the unemployment stage but if all person well-educated. So, they easily do job and no one's soul to allow to do crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...ng to that place where government allow to keep all criminals at one place because when...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
...nd lock in the prison. They donot allow to meet with the any family members. In this ca...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...f any person go at that place as he/she think their reputation is down in the society...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...l to decline crime. To add it, crime is do by masses when they have not job. In th...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...rime is do by masses when they have not job. In this case, they have not any source...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...To summarize, according to me, literacy is best way to reduce violence rather than pris...
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Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...easily do job and no ones soul to allow to do crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65032679739 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50536823786 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7640553866 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0555555556 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220172939631 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776835872323 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803400113525 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14681830312 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656159323299 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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