Now many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes for this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?
Home is the place where people live and recharge after a long work day. These days, however, citizens tend to spend more time outside than at home. In this essay, I will discuss some causes and effects.
In today’s world, society thrives and individuals chase the world. Therefore, there is a variety of work that they have to perform in order to make ends meet. What I mean is that citizens are more likely to be busy at work, some must overwork because of the demand. For illustration, many Vietnamese migrate to the US for a better life; however, to achieve this wish, they have to work from day to night despite the workload. Moreover, as there is numerous entertainment in the city life, the young enjoy hanging out with their peers. As a result, they are not interested in residing in their house
This phenomenon has both beneficial and negative effects. Due to workers continuing to manufacture at the workplace, society will experience economic growth. Plus, parents must earn money for their families. On the other hand, overwork can lead to health issues, despite the fact that they work nonstop, they just focus on money and ignore the health. Additionally, parents who are constantly occupied with their job, the child might not be able to receive love from them.
In conclusion, most people spend less time at home because it is life. They have to work for a living, so there would be no money without them. Besides, there is a wide variety of entertainment attractions. Overall this brings benefits for companies and the economy but it has some drawbacks for some individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86496350365 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57602451186 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2020360132 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264781818021 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703005851274 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565054883304 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159261716237 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651159849917 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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