Now many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes for this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?
In recent years, there has been a decrease in the amount of time people spend at home. This essay will discuss some of the reasons and effects of this phenomenon.
There are several reasons why people spend little time at home. In the modern world, everyone has their own economic burden as they have to pay for housing, food and many other necessities. Therefore, people stay at work for extra-shift to earn more money to have a saving for future plans they already contemplated. For instance, people in some East Asian countries, would go to work at 7 in the morning and not come back home no sooner than 9 p.m. Furthermore, in metropolitan areas, where all of the hotspots of night tourism are, citizens can have a broader range of choices for entertainment activities. Young adults, in particular, would rather stay up late and fool around with their mates than stays at home and miss all the fun.
There definitely are some advantages and drawbacks to this new change of behavior. On the one hand, people can have slightly higher incomes and opportunities in the future and the local economy can have greater growth with the number of overtime workers and people using local business services. However, this also poses a burning problem that individuals can experience stress and other mental health illness which eventually can drag the happiness index of that particular region or city down.
In conclusion, this change in way of behavior is a double-edged sword and there are many reasons that can lead to this sudden change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87404580153 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58783410976 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3856750454 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266681406735 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110593724382 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613365471576 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173659519318 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727930483743 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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