Now many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes for this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?
In today's busy life, most people have to chase survival. As a result, they are no longer able to devote more time to their homes. And this phenomenon of modern society affects both individuals and society. The purpose of this essay is to explain my views on this issue.
First of all, this is true because people get deep into work most of the time in one day. They want to hang out to relieve stress and change the atmosphere for this reason. Or they simply spend time out with friends and family in their spare time. Furthermore, they do not want to be in a circle from home to school or work. They may feel trapped and exhausted. For instance, in Covid-19, there is a report that divorce has increased because of isolation, so couples could not find their own space and felt trapped.
And the fact that they get out so much will have a lot of impact on themselves and society. For individuals, they may find an additional source of motivation or a hobby that improves their lives more than in the past. Not only that but it can also enhance their emotional state and work progress, find new inspiration. But if they hang out too much and if the cost of each outing is too expensive, they have an additional financial burden. And one day they will barely pay for this model. In addition to indirectly boosting the economy and the entertainment industry, they have had a positive impact on society back at home without changing anything.
In conclusion, spending less time at home is an inevitable phenomenon and has a huge impact on both individuals and society. This can be seen in the form of increased spending on recreation, travel, and other leisure activities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59197324415 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52823785804 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4568083459 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226418979233 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745847693535 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672077502322 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164382620924 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067819099343 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59197324415 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52823785804 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4568083459 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226418979233 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745847693535 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672077502322 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164382620924 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067819099343 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.