Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a growing tendency for animal testing to advance medical knowledge and examine the safety of some products. This issue frequently generates a heated debate with supporters remaining that it is vital to humanity, whilst opponents claim that humans have no moral right to justify the pain these creatures have to suffer. In my personal opinion, I believe that animal experiments should be limited and use for medical purposes only. This essay will first demonstrate the suffers animals experienced, followed by an analysis of how it is important to consider tangible benefits it brings to society.
There is an argument of justification, which can demonstrate the statement to wit; animals also have feelings and their lives should be respected. This borne by the fact opponents of these research claim that in the laboratory, animals are given illnesses and have to experience trauma to do research and to test the safety of products, when they clearly can use alternative methods such as silicon models. The Times recently reported that many countries such as Korea are now banned animal testing in the cosmetic industry.
Nonetheless, it is more imperative to reminisce that the pain animals have to suffer pay for the well-being of humanity. The rationale behind this is there are many medical experiments involved experimental on animals and a vast majority hold the opinion that certain pain on mice or cats can be justified, if the lives of people are saved. As mirrored by a case of a new cancer medicine from Vietnam that experts has successfully discovered by using animal in the process of researching.
From my point of view, I agree with the banning of animal testing in non-medical research, but I believe that it is a necessary evil to use it for the purpose of inventing new drugs or medicines before equally effective alternative methods have been developed.
Subsequently, weighing all the aforementioned, it now safely stated that animals experiments playing an essential role in advancing medicine knowledge and that other industries should be banned from using this method.
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...fied, if the lives of people are saved. As mirrored by a case of a new cancer medi...
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...hould be banned from using this method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18658892128 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87232238287 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5012980113 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332939744833 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124749990869 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483193564373 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190973250799 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369319192514 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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