Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools. Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere? Provide your opinion and use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this contemporary era, technology is progressing at an exponential pace. Acquiring knowledge of a computer becomes essential for everyone. it is commonly believed that computer education is provided in schools right from childhood, but few people might be believed that children can learn computer skills naturally. In my opinion, school is the best place where students can obtain technological skills.
Looking at the growth of technology, every school needs to provide computer education to students. To survive in a technical environment, everyone needs adequate knowledge of a computer. it is better to teach a computer to children right from their childhood so they get rid of fear for technology and start learning at an early age. For instance, nowadays, In education the use of a computer for various tasks such as online examination, video lectures, study materials becomes frequent so students should become familiar with these without fear and being interested to learn from technology. Distance learning, faster results, and accurate calculation are possible only by using the technology.
it is difficult for students to learn these skills naturally by their daily interaction with technology. children should not allow to use a computer without guidance because it has good effects and bad effects too. school guidance helps students to learn the technology with its quality features together with its unacceptable features.
In conclusion, the new generation should have sufficient awareness about technology for a better future. it would be better if this information is given to children with proper guidance at school.
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- Nowadays computer education is compulsory for your learners in most schools Do you think this is necessary or will children acquire these skills naturally from their daily interaction with technology everywhere Provide your opinion and use specific reason 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59288537549 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95090460034 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1218691004 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260991125158 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902079846482 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598621107048 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159121353462 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401552501343 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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