Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
information has direct relation with knowledge so sharing information is like sharing knowledge.There is a controversial argument on sharing information about scientific research, business and the information about academic section. it is often argued that these information are very sensitive to share and may lead to evil act. On the other side few believe that, information is source of knowledge and sharing these information leads to improve knowledge of individuals. In my opinion, however, I believe information leads to knowledge but it may leads to negative impact on society.
Exploring the scientific research has some benefits such as it helps students to get more interest science and encourage them to involve in scientific research in future. Although it is benevolent some people might use these for evil act. For instance, apple seeds are like poison and may kill a person if it is taken in sufficient amount. this information may be used by criminal to kill someone.
Publishing information about business helps others to learn from it. it is also beneficial to raise funding by publishing business plans, however it has some negative impact too. Take an example of business rival that may use these information in noxious way to damage the opponent business.
For transparent education system helps to mitigate baised desicison and improve the quality of education but it may lead to misdeed. for example, if information related to a person who is checking the papers is known then some might trouble that responsible person.
To conclude,Considering all, it is evident that,however, there are few benefits for sharing information but the downside outweighs that benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42322097378 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0990512173 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.109788816 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348611199335 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115587373683 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727846731653 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163163208446 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880125200367 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.