Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to make families closer?
Recent time, families are not having a strong bond as they used to have in past time. This is mainly because people spend most of their time on social media and in the workplace. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal this situation.
Firstly, the most common reasons for a decline in the closeness of families is compulsive checking of social media that has made face-to-face communication very difficult. People addiction toward Modern technology make them more interested in their online life than interacting with their family in their free time. Secondly, there is currently an excessive amount of competition in the workplaces, so it can be said that people pay more attention to their career than their family. As a result, most of them work longer in the office, making it quite difficult for them to spend time with their loved ones.
There are two ways to strength family bonds One way is to make sure that while you are with your family, you are not using any smart devices such as phone, tablets and laptops Moreover, instead of playing games on the phone, it's best to engage with your children or another family member in some physical games that will surely help you build a good relationship with them. Another method is to arrange trip every month where person have no stress about work and this time just for family. This solution hopefully helps them to understand each other in better way and as well they will get to know the importance of each one.
In conclusion, busy modern lifestyles and modern technology are causing families to become less close. We should try to halt this trend as it has more negative than positive outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... decline in the closeness of families is compulsive checking of social media that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79109589041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42824158528 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6943337759 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204477985351 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703753603687 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384054050124 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122674270159 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177977034897 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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