Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
The advancement of technology has paved the way of health-care innovation, including not only creating groundbreaking health treatments and medication but also providing appropriate health-care services. As a result, many individuals may lean towards opting for various available choices in treatment rather than being loyal to their current doctor. In this essay, I will delve into the drawbacks of this practice that are more likely to outweigh its benefits.
Undoubtedly, a vast array of health treatment and medicine is readily accessible, given by the fast-paced technology. Patients are now at ease , for example, by search their syndromes on the internet and figuring out some popular health services on certain social media platforms before making the ultimate decision. Not only does this practice cast light on the patient’s problems but it also serves as a modality to deplete the phenomenon of monopoly in the field of medication.
On the other hand, frequently altering doctors puts individuals at risk. First and foremost, such patients doing this practice are denying the familiarity that could solely be provided by their usual doctors, who get used to their patients, scrutinize their health progress and give the best suitable treatment for their well-being. Additionally, Technology also serves as a knife-edge when there is saturation of doctor’s or medicine’s information on the internet which we are, as being bad-informed, unable to recognize whether it is believable or not in terms of medication and health-care.
In conclusion, while the variety of health services offers some certain advantages, it is crucial for patients to consider carefully that medicine and doctor before delivering their health problems to them. Choosing their usual doctors, due to their trustworthy healthcare and familiarity, is safer than sorry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57243816254 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05399038479 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1099807893 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.363636364 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233614974222 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863236766379 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406366244114 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149996789175 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028362528596 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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