Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, more and more unwell people have begun to adopt alternative medicines and treatments. In my opinion, although these can sometimes be effective, the trend is generally negative due to the superiority and specificity of modern medicine.
Advocates of alternatives argue that there is historical evidence to support their effectiveness. A pertinent example of this is the popularity of traditional Chinese medicine in Asia. Many medicines and their treatments date back hundreds, even thousands of years. During that time, they have been tested and their effectiveness verified in a number of cases. Later contemporary health researchers are often able to identify the scientific basis, but there may be remedies in use today that we still do not understand. Just like we use some generic drugs to treat similar diseases such as headaches, fatigue, sickness, etc. This lack of understanding should not be used as a reason to question their overall importance.
However, the majority of possible medical treatments are modern. Scientists now better understand the basic structure of cells, viruses, bacteria, cancer and many other diseases. This has enabled the creation of undeniably effective methods such as surgery and the discovery of important drugs such as penicillin. There is no doubt as to why these drugs work and therefore in the future they will only become more refined and safer. In contrast, traditional medicine and alternative drugs may have effects of unknown cause but their applicability is limited and cannot progress over time.
In conclusion, with some exceptions, traditional medicine is also a better alternative to less proven treatments and pharmaceuticals. Patients can try to use them but should also rely on their doctor’s instructions and recommendations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47670250896 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10335488239 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6034977728 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203741177027 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060878829767 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399544129594 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117409130586 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432645778404 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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