Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The international tourism industry has thrived in the past few decades. While people get a chance to encounter vast variety of cultures while visiting foreign countries, it has been suggested that it creates conflicts more often than people getting to know each other. However, in my opinion, this statement in not completely true as majority of the times, people just learn new things about the indigenous cultures while visiting other nations.
Tourists are looked down upon in some areas due to several reasons. The conspicuous reason is that tourist often have little or no respect for the place, people, or the culture and history of people of the place that they are visiting. The only thing that they are interested is in visiting the famous sites of the area. while doing so, the visitors throw garbage and sometime do such actions which are unacceptable to the people of the locality. For example, being from a modest culture, public displays of affection are despised. However, some foreigners ignore this and show intimacy on public places; something which Indians vehemently disapprove of.
Nevertheless, tourism across the borders acts as a platform for trade of knowledge, culture and money among the countries. When tourist interact with the residents of different nation, they get to learn a lot; their language and their historical and cultural background. This creates an understanding and a sense of brotherhood among them as they may find something common in their cultures. Apart from this, tourism creates uncountable job opportunities in the host country and thus, helps the locals to make some money. the money spend by tourist also gives a huge boost to the fiscal health of the country. Hence, the locals do not mind the presence tourists. In fact, in several famous tourist destinations the livelihood of the locals depend entirely on the tourists.
In conclusion, although the difference in how people from different cultures perceive the same things may result in conflicts among people from different nations, international tourism helps in reducing these difference by introducing the people to different cultures.
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spends'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28197674419 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71882838467 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6190198091 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.882352941 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222816321014 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595900208616 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584702597567 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137070820644 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575192517699 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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