Nowadays, a lot of people in college are doing academic study. we should encourage them do learn vocational skills( like plumbers and electricians). Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, majority of people decide to pursue tertiary education after completing their schooling; however, some believe that they should opt for occupational training instead. Although getting vocational training straight after school has its own benefits, I do not agree with the notion that we should persuade students to pursue it instead of studying in colleges.
Getting vocational training can make the students economically stable. After completing their training, they can start earning early in their life. This would enable them to afford the basic necessities in life and to support their family. In addition, since they would have more time, they will be able to gain more experience and thus, there may be higher chance of them getting promoted or getting paid more to do their job. Moreover, with a large proportion of teenagers going for academic study in colleges, the demand of skilled workers such as plumbers, technicians, electricians, mechanics, and builders has increased dramatically in recent years. This has caused their fees, which were nominal in the past, to experience a significant surge in most of the developed countries. Hence, getting vocational education can assure employment and financial stability for the students.
However, academic study has an edge over occupational training, as the former offers a lucrative job as well as respect in the society. Manual workers, no matter how much they earn, will always be regarded as second class workers, whereas the qualified professionals are revered in the society. Even the large companies prefer individuals with degrees, rather than the ones with only experience, as having higher education is a symbol of higher intellect, determination and discipline. Also, the skilled labourers have to work under the architects, designers, managers, and engineers, in other words, those who have attained degrees in colleges or universities.
In conclusion, while those with practical training of an occupation can start earning early in life, getting higher education pays of later when students get a white-collar job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e. This would enable them to afford the basic necessities in life and to support their family. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51851851852 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86558741288 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1982358716 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113935770589 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365766220501 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442026018829 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671074110398 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605142073933 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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