Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, due to the fast means of transportation and communication, the world is more connected. Every year a large number of people travel overseas either for vacation or for business, and sometimes to see their family. The continued growing international tourism is certainly beneficial to boost economic activities. Although there are some negative cultural aspects, I find it hard to agree that it creates more conflicts and misunderstanding than friendship.
To begin with, the tourism industry is one of the fastest growing business with a diverse impact. On the one hand, it promotes many businesses and employment and on the other, a large number of people from different cultural backgrounds are met face to face during the visit. Though, their belief and thought are varied, in most of the cases they start communication, interact positively, and share their ideas and experiences and ended up with friendship. Moreover, travelers and local people go along together quickly as it is beneficial for both. Secondly, the visitors can read and understand the culture and custom of the country before they make a trip. As long as tourists understand and respect the local customs and local people of the host country, there is less likely of happening any tussle or tension. Additionally, people of the host country are also well aware of the economic benefits of tourism, and so in many cases, they tend to be more flexible with visitors expectations and needs. Finally, the public authorities of a tourist area are also very careful to provide comfort, security and harmonious environment.
On the other side, the misunderstanding may arise from poor communication as a result of language barriers and different understanding levels. In addition to that, bad intended or ill-minded people from both tourists and hosts, who trying to rob or cheat, and creating terror could also cause tension. However, these are not major issues and could be addressed with a better security system and well-trained tourist guides.
In conclusion, the benefits of the tourism industry are enormous and they are sufficient to outweigh the negative impacts. As long as, there are mutual respect and clear communication, the misunderstandings are less likely to happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28531855956 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02485464578 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0387293259 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2066511375 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585971058326 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414033320304 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111221200706 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313259763652 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.