Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Tourism plays a vital role in progress and earn a revenue for any nation. Although, tourism creates tension between people from different cultures, i strongly disagree with given notion. Reasons for my inclinations are articulated in ensuring paragraphs.
Firstly, when a perosn travels from one country to other country then they adopt that country's culture,cuisine and habits. And several countries like Thailand, Maldives thrives on tourism. Secondly, people from different nations exchange their cultural activities by travel. For instance, plenty of tourists come to india for spiritual activity. In addition, tourism is fastest growing industry so people become more friendly, understanding towards tourists. Also, people ready to change for tourists demands.
Afterall, it is also true that,torism bring cultures together and make unity. Moreover, tourism help in tourist country's development and economy. To examplify, dubai is significant example for that, Dubai is modern city because of this possible by tourism industry. And also tourism change people's attitude towards tourists and make more tolerant. So tourism is important industry for some country.
Thus, to conclude, it can be said that international tourism allivetes tension between two nations rather than creates. Also tourism is the most important industry in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83417085427 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77274028438 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678391959799 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7524462175 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5625 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4375 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29174385893 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949941536001 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916306981498 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193986447157 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691618838434 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.65 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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