Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Nowadays, there are many opinions from the internet are shown the information that people in their thirties are suitable to get married and have children. It is considered trully acceptable for the case when the parents who can push their ability toward the new family after being done with the studies. Being at that age They are able to use their own skills to make the better future for their children. In my point of view, I partly agree with this and this essay will show the its benefits.
To begin with, getting married after the age of thirties is very beneficial for many aspects. After many years of study and the experiencing interactions, the couple have enough skills from balancing the main income to stabilizing the own emotions. The majority of adults in their thirties have conditions and mature enough to get into the marriage relationship, in fact, when people get married and have babies from that age, they can fully prepare to deal with the challenges that coming out with the marriage, such as giving the best education to their children or self dealing the personal problems more patiently.
The large amount of people who is under thirties should not get married due to the lack of family income which is led by the unemployment. First and for most, every single person who is graduated from schools have to find a job for themself in order to have their own pelf. Moreover, it is difficult to have a special relationship which leads to the marriage at this age for some personal matter. Suddenly, several comments have somehow admitted that the people who prefer to marry at a later age are more successful and better equipped to raise their children and create a better life for them. Due to the perspectives which have been analized in the essay, it is obviously that I cannot deny with the mentioned statement that marrying in the thirties can make a better life for them and also for their children.
In conclusion, I personally believe that it is more beneficial for people to get married in their thirties than in their younger days. With all the advantages and the developments that the modern society brings on, humans should change their own living, including their mental and physical life, to achieve their true happiness in a family connection and only the thirties and later can offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7960199005 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47969402415 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8490191549 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35609347123 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13977185869 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663111912733 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236595515156 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273737609739 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.