Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Many suppose that people in their thirties are suitable to get married and have children.Normally, It is stable for them when the parents are done with the studying. They can use their own skills to make the better future for their children.While, other people believe that having children when they are younger are better than. Thus, I personally agree with this opinions and this essay will show the benefits of it somehow.
On the one hand, In the modern world, getting married after thirty is very beneficial that they have finished their studying for many years. They have enough skills and responsibilities through the experience and can control their behavior. Many adults in their thirties are having a standard living and mature enough to have family. Moreover, having stable financial can give the parents many choices for their children. However, when people get married and have children at this age, they are fully prepared to deal with the challenges that come along with marriage, such as age gap.
On the other hand, people until getting to thirty those who have not been married yet because the stable financial status of each family is the most important thing. Firstly, when the people are over twenty years old, they must need to find a work for themselves so they can earn for living. Furthermore, also having a love relationship between two other different genders is hard at this age. Some researches have been showed that individuals who prefer to marry at a later age are more successful as well as better equipped to raise the children well and give them a better life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the people could have more benefits by getting married in their thirties, rather than when they are younger. Along with all the welfare and developments that the society brings on, getting married after thirty can give many benefits to the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94968553459 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51297806193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1083147728 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456799935471 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172503374483 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863552673566 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320438460022 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878331296572 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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