Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Many suppose that people in their thirties are suitable to get married and have children due to the fact that there could be a plenty of benefits that my support to their living standards. In general, it is stable for the new couple when being finished their university-study, as well as they can use their own skills to create the better future for their children. Thus, I personally agree with this opinions and this essay will show the benefits of it somehow.
To begin with my first state of thinkings, in the current living, getting married after thirty is very beneficial as when they have finished their studying for some years. They have enough skills and responsibilities through the social experiences and the right life-style which they have gained throughout the certain time. Many adults in their thirties are having a standard living and being mature enough to settle in a family. Moreover, having stable-financial status can give the new parents many choices to help their children being developed correctly and effectively. However, when people get married and have children at those ages, they are fully prepared to deal with the challenges that come along with marriage, such as age gap or lacking of kid-care.
Being at the other side of my thoughts, people until getting to their thirties, those who have not been married yet because of the unstable-financial status should hold on and develop more for a while in both material and spiritual. In fact, after the university graduation, they must need to find a job for themselves so they can earn for living. Furthermore, having a family-relationship between two other different genders is more than difficult at this age period. In condition, some researches have been showed that individuals who prefer to marry at a later age are often more successful as well as better equipped to raise the children well and give them a better life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the people could have more benefits by getting married in their thirties, rather than when they are younger. Along with all the welfares and developments that the society brings on, getting married in the thirties can certainly offer many benefits to the family itself, to the community for all the good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99734748011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79662155224 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509283819629 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5395049157 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412359649934 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151879698379 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807855486309 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28065750664 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709103184562 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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