Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Many opinions from the internet show the information that people in their thirties are suitable to get married and have children. It is normally stable for them when the parent are done with study. They can use their own skills to make better future for their child. I also agree with this and this essay will show the benefits of it.
In the modern world, getting married after thirty is very beneficial. The couple when finished many years of studied, They are have enough skills through the civic education and can control their activities. Most adults in their thirties are enough conditions. They are also mature to make a family. When people get married and have babies at this age, they are fully prepared to deal with the challenges that come along with marriage. They are able to not only send their children to the best schools but also deal with their private things more patiently.
The people before thirty cant get marry yet because the income of each family is the most important thing. So first, when the people that enough 22 years old have to find a work for themself so they can make money. Also having a good relationship between boy and girl are hard at this age too. Some research has shown that individuals who prefer to marry at a later age are more successful as well as better equipped to raise the children well and make better life for them, the good one are better one.
In my conclusion, the people I believe that the people have more benefits by getting married in their thirties, rather than in their younger days. With all the advantages and developments that the society brings on, things are ready to change. As my parent told me that when im still young, they cant marry yet even they are still in love and that was one of my knowledge about this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...inished many years of studied, They are have enough skills through the civic educati...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nges that come along with marriage. They are able to not only send their children...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e patiently. The people before thirty cant get marry yet because the income of eac...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rk for themself so they can make money. Also having a good relationship between boy ...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... told me that when im still young, they cant marry yet even they are still in love a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56832298137 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16530015201 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515527950311 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3851184957 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404665042593 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127016373567 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746564306321 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259495676963 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561755876044 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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