Nowadays the machines have become more sophisticated to which more and more jobs tasks which involve high physical work are being done by machines. What do you think this development has negative or positive effects?
This is the era of development in science and technology, as all kind of manual work has been replaced with automated machine. Due to development in technology, we can see huge impact on work efficiency, work time, development etc. Apart from, this development has some negative impact such as unemployment rate, safety, and environment. I will discuss in detail in further paragraph.
On one hand, we can see transformation in every jobs whether it is small or big. The cause of transformation is due development in scientific research. In the past, all kind of work had been done by manually and it took much time to complete. Nowadays, any type of task has been done by heavy machinery and it takes very less time as compared to past. For instance, constructions of infrastructure have been done with the help of crane and this will take only one or two year to make one building. Another positive effect is that work efficiency, as we can see accurate work within less time. Moreover, one can only have to control heavy machine with computer and as per command the machine work. Thus, less time needed to complete task with accuracy. Another thing is that, the relations between countries are increasing because of import and export business has been gone up.
On the other hand, coin has two sides, by this way; there are some drawbacks of this development. One negative development is that unemployment rate is rising, men are replaced with automated machine. For instance, in India, the unemployment rate is approximately 8% in present time but this will incline to 10% in future. However, sometime is dangerous to work with heavy machinery. If there is fault in manufacture then this fault can cause accident.
To conclude that, positive effects are more than to negative effects. If, we can try to avoid negative effects with some precaution then positive development will help to make our country developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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...dangerous to work with heavy machinery. If there is fault in manufacture then this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, another thing, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92901234568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84822032424 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503086419753 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6268191867 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.85 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195512965356 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601965368913 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492443486315 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12478804721 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361222560007 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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