Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that humans being are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Modern civilization is witnessing the loss of certain species across the globe. For the sake of nature, there are advocates for the view that animal protection should be taken into thorough consideration whereas critics assert that humans being must be high on the agenda. I would concede that mankind's society should be prioritized over other creatures.
For one thing, the animal rights proponents may believe that human function based on the coexistence with nature and the demise of those species could result in ecological crisis. It is true that animals play an indispensable significant role in our lives in farming and agriculture. Not only it is an ample source of food providing nutrients but also some of them act as driving forces for biodiversity to thrive. For instance, bees shoulder the duty of provoking the process of pollination, which contributes to a diverse flora system. Undoubtedly, the today’s world scenario would be very different had one of them completely disappeared, leaving alone the gradual environmental degradation.
For another, I believe that the civilian’s lives should be held in higher esteem. It would be useless if any effort and resources allocated to the preservation do not come along with guaranteeing our survival. In other words, steps should be taken in accordance with benefits for human society. Regardless of whether several creatures are at the verge of extinction, we should only intervene in or disrupt the cycle of nature unless they are the victims of mankind’s progress. It is reasonable to accept the loss of the ecosystem to a certain degree since our abilities are incompatible to prevent all the tragedies that it brings about.
To conclude, animal protection is crucial and deserves additional attention. Nonetheless, humans being must be ensured and highlighted in this era for the sake of our recent life and in a larger context, our generation.
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- Tomorrow is the most important thing in our life However some people think that the present time is more important How important is it for individuals and the country to think and do something for the future What is your own opinion 78
- Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly but most patients do not follow an exercise routine Why do you think this happens How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly 89
- Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom Discuss both views and giv 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nonetheless, so, whereas, for instance, for one thing, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25974025974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97819845683 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7941369216 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162516331269 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517552652367 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441758205306 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105230204837 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271735649083 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.