Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Admittedly, those who hold professional degrees at a certain level are considered to be less inclined to criminality. Hence, the suggestion to diminish the crime volume is to provide instructions of morality while incarcerating offenders. I partially agree with this view on safety grounds, however, to have a sustainable and solid education system is a more justified solution to help crack down crime.
On the one hand, criminality is not merely associated with the figure of illiteracy as generally believed. However, notwithstanding the social class in which a person perceives formal or informal education, the context where the material life conditions are unable to cover the exorbitant daily costs could arouse their pessimistic attitudes and embark on the criminal road for intangible pressure of survival. For instance, many graduates from universities fail in seeking occupations, being unemployed not only cannot provide for themselves a sustainable life but also being considered as the social burden by family and the others. Potentially, in some infarctions among this group, crime could be attributed to anti-social offense, leading to robberies and severely murder for posessions.
For another, rehabilitative measures could be a feasible way to strengthen the law-abiding awareness among prisoners. Evidently, certain forms of deterrences are essential to curb the repeat crime incidence but the results are not always desirable. Any sense of fear or respectation for the law system will be gradually faded if it is not enhanced. Otherwise, prevention is deemed better than cure, secured education must be implemented to get to the root of the problem. Children should be instructed and geared towards ethical behaviour from an early age and emphasis must be laid on the development of clarity to distinguish illegal and legal activities. Juvenile delinquency once is prevented will likely to accompany a drastic reduction in further criminality within a firm.
To conclude, the option to educate prisoners is necessary but not sweeping enough to curb crime rates. Yet, education in formative years will be more reasonable in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52552552553 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1206851191 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645645645646 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0483917898 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151982742371 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531734960325 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444275507367 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106661006952 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501591348742 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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